A Broad Outline: Phoenix's Characteristics

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Task: Write a proposal containing ALL of the following items:

More than just a new species
· Story Arc: A broad outline – Your orientation, the complication (which must be connected to science or technology in some way), development of the complication leading to the climax, resolution of the complication. (150 words approx.)

On the coast of Florida, a team of 5 researchers, have received information about a new marine life species, miles out in the Atlantic Ocean off Florida. A team of researchers in a submarine is caught in a deadly sea storm. The instruments on board go haywire. The submarine submerges deep into the ocean until the storm passes. Afterward, the submarine surfaces, but the instruments are still not functioning properly.
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Phoenix started off in Florida, 2020 where he lived in a small home and worked as a marine biologist. Phoenix never took opportunities, because he was to concerned about others. This held him back from his full potential. Through the journey of travelling on the submarine, and arriving at the new land his friends and son had always been with him. When Phoenix arrives at the new land, he knows he has to save the human race. His friends help him out with his plan. Because of his heroic traits he volunteers to be the bait, even though this could put him in a lot of danger. He was to distract the enemy, which were the robots controlling the robots, while the others deactivated them. In the process he was zapped with a laser and dropped dead. The others followed his plan and deactivated the robots. They were all horrified to see Phoenix dead, but he suddenly awakened because since the robots were dead everything they did was reversed. Phoenix was a hero, and because of him the saved the human race. After this experience, Phoenix changed he started to take all the opportunities that were given them, he started to appreciate life, while he could. He still cared for people, but he started to do more for himself because he realised you only live once. Phoenix risked his life to save the human race and the