While Bennetts in passing references the “permanent state of simmering anger in all too many women” (42), Bartel remains fixated on this “level of fury unlike anything [they hav] ever experienced” (58). They both provide anecdotal evidence of this, with Bennetts first citing the case of a mother, upon leaving her dream job to raise her kids, becomes shocked at the tone in which she describes this choice (42-43). And while she relies on just one example of this, Bartel continuously references this shortcoming of his wife, from her scornful reaction to his meals or rude remarks to his bedtime routines. While these evidences do strengthen the papers, Leslie Bennetts presents a stronger case by breaking away from solely emotional appeals and relying on confirmative fact. Eric Bartel’s repetitive complaint of his wife’s complaints present a more accusatory tone, and distract from the true intent of his paper. It serves less to elicit sympathy, and more often than not comes across as a cry for