I am now writing strong 3.5’s with good signal phrases. Last year I never used a proper signal phrase. I didn’t know it wasn’t supposed to be a full sentence. All my 3.5’s now have proper starts to quotes such as “Comer said this of Medina’s surfing.” The weakest part of my writing is my analyses. I need to delve deeper and add more insight. I never really flesh out my ideas enough. My A Good Story 3.5 is a great example of this. Here I talk about the mom being a critic very briefly. In about 2 sentences. This was an idea that really could have been dug out a little more. My long term goal as a writer is to increase the quality of my analyses. I will do this by having them be at least 7 sentences. This will force me to explain my ideas