These individuals include David Williams, David Zilberman, Robert Goldberg.
Now let's begin with his reference to Robert Goldberg. He starts out using personal feelings and telling a story with a dramatic background to it. As said above this isn't the author, it's someone who the author agrees with. Goldberg is someone who the author puts in place to set the mood. I would say that choosing this person was a fantastic way of starting. It sets the stage and really gets you in the guts with those feels. The way it cuts off to David and gets into him is too drastic. The build up never reaches its