The feedback I received from Isabella prompted me to go back and revise my résumé. The changes that I made included fixing the overall format, adding more information under experiences, and listing more skills. The structure of my résumé contained a few inconsistent sections. For instance, under …show more content…
The two main suggestions included explaining my clubs/activities and deleting some of the content under the awards and honors section. Personally, I could go on and on about the activities that I have participated in. This is the reason why I wrote them in a brief manner. Most of the clubs/activities are listed clear enough for others to understand what it is. If not, I could always explain to the employer what I did in those clubs/ activities. In addition to the clubs/activities portion of my résumé, I chose to keep the information about my awards and honors listed on my résumé in its original format. Honestly speaking some of them are outdated, however, I need them. I’m a freshman in college and I haven’t received much honors or awards. With that being said, I believe that it’s acceptable for me to keep some of the information regarding my high school