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G- Will the boy choose the girl or the fish? Y- Girl R- pretty
- body figure
- tan skin
-popular
R- likes her
-know all of her moods
-shows of how many laps he can do
-cleans the canoe for their date Y- Fish R-super big fish
-biggest fish he would ever catch
-the canoe was being pulled backwards
-was breaking the rod …show more content…
The first choice he has, is the girl. First of all this girl is beautiful. She has a great body figure, that fits nicer in the dress she was wearing then a swimsuit. Also she has very nice, tan skin. She is very popular, and doesn’t care much about the things that the boy is interested in. But the boy really likes Shelia. He would swim laps in front of her too show off and cleaned the canoe till it was gleaming for their date. The other option that the boy has, is the fish. This boy LOVES fishing. it in his favorite thing to do, and he spent a lot of time practicing to be the best at it. Also he spent a lot of money for all the super, fancy equipment he has. This fish is the biggest fish he would ever have it it would choose to catch the fish. I think he should choose the fish. I believe this because he loves fishing and the girl doesn’t seem very interested in the boy as much as he is in instructed in …show more content…
I was wrong because even though school is important I missed an opportunity to do something I love and be a good student.
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Paragraph (written in complete sentence/correct paragraph format): My connection to the story is I too have made a bad decision in my life. A couple years ago I choose to take a break of playing softball. I regret making that choice because I could be better than I am right now if I would have chosen to play. Also it is fun because I play with all my friends. It is also a great opportunity to get better and play varsity at a young age. I am also a good teammate and player. I cheer for my teammates and try hard to be the best I can be. The other option I had is not to play , which is what I choose. This is because it takes up time from school work, choir concerts and after practices I would have to do my homework which would give me less sleep. Its also comes in the way of other night activities like, parties, other sports games, and church on Wednesday nights. I choose not to do softball so I could become a better student. I was wrong because even though school is important I missed an opportunity to do something I love and be a good