Betty Burden's Arguement Analysis

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Envision yourself in a tournament, though you do not win, you still get a trophy symbolizing what you did. In your eyes, you are beyond content. In the argument of “Participation Trophies Send a Dangerous Message” by Betty Burden and “In Youth Sports, Participation Trophies Send a Powerful Message” by Parker Abate, they talk about how the trophies given out could lead to different meanings for the children. In society, many organizations distribute trophies so kids can be boosted with self-confidence and feel a sense of accomplishment instead of being despondent. Though, just from this minor offering, it can change the perspective of children. So, children should be able to receive participation trophies.

As children, they are still experiencing the world and giving them a sense of accomplishment can promote many aspects of their lives. The evidence stated by Abate that “Any kind of honor can make a young kid feel...he or she meant something to the team” supports this idea. Children are extremely sensitive and knowing they accomplished something can raise their ideas on what can be done and leave room for improvement as they grow. On the contrary, the evidence
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Furthermore, the evidence stated by Abate “Knowing...they are not...talented...children go out and participate...to their best abilities.” supports the point constructed. Though others are not skilled in that field, they still try to their potential and exert themselves. In addition, the evidence stated from Berden that “Regardless of individual effort or...skills, all who participate receive equal acknowledgement” is averse to the point. Though others are skilled, that does not mean others should not be accounted for the deed they executed and instead every individual should be acknowledged for the achievements they have