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The unforgettable
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By: JULIUS JAENSCH
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A normal student connection, in the late 80th, of 5 people, which included 3 men and 2 women, wanted getting high and relax a weekend in the forest, where they also rent a wood house.
Ricky(23), who had long red hair and wore glasses, was a dealer and always high, Sofie(19), a blond girl, was the most prettiest, and a real barbie. She kind of fell in love with the handsome
Sam(20), who looked really good,well trained, but an Asshole most of the time. And their was the couple, Marie(22) and Josh(25), who always loved each other, now for 10 years since the middle school. Both of them not looking really good and both not the thinnest, but the knew each other such a long time and Marie loved him, but she is really religious, so still a virgin.
So on the morning when they met on their campus in Texas, they were all in a good mood and all, especially Ricky ready to get high. They got together in the Big Van and were ready to go, but than they heard a scream…, it was the director, who just wanted to say: ’’have fun“.
On the way to the wood in Texas, which was a very lonely and awesome forest, with a lake and nice animals, sam hold on the right side of route 123, to check if they forget something, because he had the feeling that something was missing or that something is wrong. After he wanted to call his mom to say that they are doing a nice weekend, he noticed what he missed, his big large cellphone. He was the only one who had one that time, but he thought, better not to tell the others, that they don't scare any accident. So Sam continued driving the big red Van trough the country on the route 123. Everything seemed to be normal, Sam was the one who cared about everything, Ricky, how to expect high, Sofie putting on her lipstick and Marie and Josh kissing each other heads…
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It was a spooky area, a lonely never visited before area, a dark and wet area, the forest came closer and they saw the spookiness of the forest, the old bridge, the spider nets everywhere, no street to drive on, just the earth under the wheels and at last but not least, their wood house…
An really old wood house, but kind of pretty in the sun shine, of the weather… a lonely place to relax and smoke weed…Ricky’s biggest dream and the other’s, agreed to smoke weed on the first, of planned four nights. The five of them were sitting outside enjoying the nature and smoking a blunt.
Listening to music has never been that intensive before. It was an unbelievable echo, which came out of the forest again…and again… and again.
The later the night got, the more tired, the got except from Josh and Marie, who decided to take a walk to the lake…
A beautiful walk, an awesome place, where the trees spread out perfectly romantic in front of the best position to look on the lake, and getting the moon light on the place, where Josh and Marie just put of their clothes and kissed like they did never before, loved like they never could have imagined and than finally they were naked… not even thinking about taking Marie’s virginity, no they knew it will happen now…but suddenly she stopped and said you need to give me the promise to marry me and do me a proposal. And Josh did so… a proposal, in the moonlight and the loneliness of this awesome place… the romance came back again and Josh laid down on her naked. Suddenly it got dark cold and spooky smoke came out of the ground… the earth moved, kind of broke and than suddenly someone came jumped out of the tree, not a human but not an animal… something with blood all over it. He ran behind both of the naked lovers, who were just
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about to have sex. In his hand a morning star, an old weapon. Josh got louder and louder…:
’’Run Marie Run… Follow .. RUN. He almost got you!…“.
She ran, she ran faster, faster and faster and… she slipped, she slipped on the wet tree and fell down…:“NOO Marie…come up“… He ran back, back to