His essay is well constructed and his wording is more professional, the feeling of him being a professional was never lost and throughout all of it he managed to be entertaining. His background and knowledge of the subject made what was written way more entertaining than it should have been and his vocabulary usage kept his essay fresh throughout its entirety. White on the other hand had a less impressive presentation. The first sentence, while entertaining, did not give a professional feel and that taste carried itself throughout the entire essay. Evidence given however kept the essay feeling credible since all of it made complete logical sense and was supported not only by facts from scientist but also photographical evidence that he had the courtesy of putting in his paper. Both the writing styles of the authors was so similar that they were almost the same, effective, to the point in some cases, and entertaining enough to where it did not struggle stay