Chris White Alien

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In the articles “Ancient alien evidence examined” and “Area 51: what is really going on there? UFOs and U-2s, aliens and A-12s” both sides give their take on the existence of aliens in different time periods, neither are perfect or something to be used in the final essay unless one of them was used in an interesting way. In the first article mentioned, Chris white explores the concept of ancient aliens existing, losing tying it to the discovery channel series of the same name. His essay is focused on dismantling popular conspiracy theorists claim that surround evidence of aliens existing in the early stages of the human race, periods around the height of the Egyptian and Mayan empires, His main support is citing archeological evidence and artifacts left intact from ancient civilizations. He explains the use of simple tools and techniques that made it possible for the ancient civilizations to achieve such amazing …show more content…
His essay is well constructed and his wording is more professional, the feeling of him being a professional was never lost and throughout all of it he managed to be entertaining. His background and knowledge of the subject made what was written way more entertaining than it should have been and his vocabulary usage kept his essay fresh throughout its entirety. White on the other hand had a less impressive presentation. The first sentence, while entertaining, did not give a professional feel and that taste carried itself throughout the entire essay. Evidence given however kept the essay feeling credible since all of it made complete logical sense and was supported not only by facts from scientist but also photographical evidence that he had the courtesy of putting in his paper. Both the writing styles of the authors was so similar that they were almost the same, effective, to the point in some cases, and entertaining enough to where it did not struggle stay