Crystal Tran
CMST 220
Informative speech
This time, in my second speech is pretty good than the first demonstration speech. I have a hook and introduction, which I am really happy for my preparation.
I know the topic “tattoo” will have some argument with, people may like it or not, that’s why I choose this topic to talk about. I am trying to introduce to my classmate how it is process. I do have my clearly thesis this time, and I am pretty confident about it.
In the body, I think I was nervous somehow, I’ve show the audiences where tattoo comes from, and what the artist need to create tattoo also step of doing it. I had the pictures of the machine and the clip that makes audience can easy to follow and understand it as well. I think it’s easy for my classmate to follow me during my speech.
In conclusion, I know there will be a little struggle for me. Because I was planning the audience more likely to have the tattoo or they may having it. I was little bit confuse, I did restate my thesis that made my audience remember it longer.
In the delivery part, I think was more comfortable and more confident than the last time I did. I think my voice was “hmm” a lot. I will try to change it, and make it better for my next persuasive speech. I tried to improve my eye contact and this time I think I am getting better. My voice was struggle in the last minutes, because I was forgot to say and confuse myself of looking too much in the notes. As my experience for the
