Creative Writing: Lola And Lola Grow Up

Warning this is not an ordinary story.

A 13 year old has just faced a difficult event in her life, she has just lost her dad in a car accident she has never faced any difficulties like this in life but after today there will be a lot of things she will have to face. I will be telling her story. Her father was funny and kind. He loved seeing Lola growup. He always thought of his family as his first priority. He was loved by everyone. So when he died it brought a lot of sadness to his family. So the reader can get more emotionally attached Her name was lola she was an only child. growing up she became a playful and nice kid. she loved to make new friends and she would always wear a red bow tie that her dad gave her before he …show more content…
Then any asked " what is your name ". It spelled Mc.clory and Lola eyes opened wide. Everyone at schools was talking about how Lola was Ms.Clory daughter. Then she realized this house use to be owned by a woman who died and her body was found 3 days later in the house when I kid threw the ball at their house and went looking for it. Ms.Clory was her name and she was in Lola's house. Lola then got scared and decided to break the rules of the game and close the bored without saying good …show more content…
But then when they walked upstairs Ms.Clory turned the fire back on. The kids did not know What was coming. bit by bit things were burning the fire got bigger and bigger. They started to smell smoke and they tried to go downstairs but they saw a fire and did not know what to do. Her mother was at work and she could not go anywhere. They were trapped and had no wear to go. Ms.Clory ghost appeared. It was a creepy old lady that had a whole bunch of pimples on her face has long grey hair. Her voice sounded like a grown man that smoked a lot. She wore a old grey dress that was ripped and as dirty as a sewer pipe. She said " run" but the kids did nothing but scream. Ms.clory then slammed the door. All the mirrors broke. All Lola and abby did was cry and ask for forgiveness. A nice appeared out of nowhere slowly ms.clory sliced Abby and Lola and left a letter. It said " leave now and no one else dies". That day when Lola's mother came home she found the house covered in blood. she started screaming “lola, lola are you here honey you're scaring please come

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