Creative Writing: Twinkie's Normal Day

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Pages: 3

Twinkie had a normal day. Normal was different for Twinkie, he was always being made fun of, bullied, and beat up. All he wants to do is to be smart and have a good job. Twinkie wasn’t his real name, his real name was Bob Smith. He lives with only his brother Max, and his sister Shelby. Max has to work so we can keep the van, and Shelby is the most popular girl in the whole school.
“She is so lucky. She doesn’t even have nice clothes, and she is still loved by everyone. I, however, get bullied by everyone.”
But otherwise life is good for him. He doesn’t live in a house but he enjoys living in the town of Dublin. He smells the restaurants, hears traffic, and lives next to a beautiful river. All of a sudden a group of kids at his school come up and jump him. He passed out and woke up in the hospital with a cast on his hand and bandages all over his head.
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“A group of kids came up and jumped you.” Max said.
The nurse walks in with a diagnostic.
“Dang! I had a pickup game at 2:00” said Twinkie.
“How long is he out?”Max asked
“Oh, thank golly he’s awake and the doctor said 4-5 weeks.” said the nurse.
“What broke?” Max asked.
“Broke?” Twinkie asked?
“Yeah you broke your arm, and you also have a mild concussion. So you can’t go to school tomorrow.” The nurse said.
It felt like forever but they finally got out of the hospital and started walking home.
“How are you feeling?” Max asked?
“Tired and mad.” Twinkie replied.
After 30 minutes of walking they reached home. And as soon as they walked in they saw their sister’s doll in the middle of the room just sitting there. Twinkie was so mad he threw the doll out the window and into the river. Then he heard a voice in his head that sounded like a small girl’s.
“I’ll be back.”
“You alright Twinkie. You look pale.” Max asked.
“I’m alright I just heard a creepy voice in my head.” Twinkie said