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Sdfghjkl;’ #2 (permalink) Sun Apr 12, 2009 5:51 am please help me to assess my essay
From ( hierarchy society ?? ) to modern society, laws are one of the most significant components to ( operate - govern ) countries.
Firstly, without laws, ( it is questionable as to whether )human society should ( could ) be operated ( self-controlled ) by spontaneous self-discipline
there is ( are ) no organizations that/which can
punish unmoral ( immoral ) ones
will be leaded ( led )
" Hence, only ethics are implemented by authorities, which, in other words, to formulate laws to administrate society, can humans enjoy harmony. " ( This paragraph definitely needs clarifying. Please rewrite. )
and fare ( fair ) to all the citizens
it’s disputable ( indisputable ) about the necessity of laws and regulations
Cypress, you wrote a good essay, and got your thoughts across well. You only failed to give your work closer scrutiny.
I hope that you do not take my corrections as criticism, but rather as helpful suggestions.
Kitosdad. #2 (permalink) Sun Apr 12, 2009 5:51 am please help me to assess my essay
From ( hierarchy society ?? ) to modern society, laws are one of the most significant components to ( operate - govern ) countries.
Firstly, without laws, ( it is questionable as to whether )human society should ( could ) be operated ( self-controlled ) by spontaneous self-discipline
there is ( are