Dizzy Star Box Poem

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In “Fizzy Star Box,” a poem by Loraine Schein, published in issue 7 of Rivet Journal, the poet depicts a lovely scene about the narrator, the star, and the fizzy box. The others who play a role in this scene are us, mother astronomy, the storm, and the physicist. Along with her four-section poem, Schein uses symbolism along with some guiding keywords. The only repeated words along the poem are star, star box, beyond.
The most interesting part of the poem is: “Like the children running the magic shop, / We live in the occult, not always knowing how / The trick is done.” Here the narrator uses “We” after mentioning “children” without clear referencing; moreover, it is unclear who is the narrator talking to. Conceivably, the narrator -presumably, a little girl- is talking to oneself, with symbolizing the unknown future to “the magic shop” where everything alters without “knowing how / The trick is done.” The unknown can be joyful and not dramatic; however, surprising and unexpected merely as magic. The narrator does not know the “the trick;” possibly, the trick symbolizes fate. Possibly, “beyond / Beyond” is the future, and the narrator wants to see the future under the protection of mother astronomy. As the narrator protects the star, she asks her
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By following this logic, the narrator is scared about the dreams that they might disappear along the