My ample amount of vocabulary allows me to create visuals to my audience. Viewers and readers want to engage in your writing. A great way to connect with your readers is to use descriptive words to give a visual to your viewers. In my Out-of-Class essay titled “Into the Wild : Good or Bad?” I wrote, “The exceptional cast attracts the moviegoers with their ability to become the characters, allowing the audience to connect with them.”. The way I used various adjectives gave a bigger picture of what I am writing. If I used “The actors moved people with their acting.”, it would have …show more content…
In the Into the Wild essay, I address my thoughts on the book. I gave solid argument. “The notable components of creating a film, Into the Wild accede viewers to enjoy the film because of the exceptional cast and ingenious cinematography”. I stated my thesis statement saying that the movie will attract the viewers because the exceptional cast and ingenious cinematography. The thesis statement did not come out vague. I stated firmly that the movie will bring in moviegoers. People tend to create thesis statment that are often vague and ambiguous, however the thesis statement must state a stance of an argument to write more later in the