The wording throughout the paragraph tended to be confusing and not worded correctly. There was also a lack of citation that weakened the paragraph. Another problem was the repetition of certain words, especially the word however. To help with my revision I went online and used a database to check for grammar problems. As I went through revising using the database I discovered other problems such as sentence structure. Some of the sentences throughout the essay were very confusing and often words were misused. I revised multiple sentences by finding words that better suit the topic sentence of the paragraph. To revision the number of times I used words I highlighted the ones that were used the most and found synonyms for the words or completely deleted the words if it was not important for the