Eleanor Roosevelt Rhetorical Analysis

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During the delivery of my commemorative speech on Eleanor Roosevelt, I could have implemented a more interesting attention grabber to grab my audiences’ attention. I delivered my information strongly at the beginning of my sentences however, as I progressed further into the thought I became quieter; this mainly occurred during my introduction and first main point. Throughout my speech, I looked at my paper frequently, often as times when I did not need to. However, my connectives were clearly stated and flowed into my main points making it easy to follow the progression of the speech. The speech was also not very biographical as I did speak about how her actions impacted those in the early 1900's and modern times. The main points of my speech