English 135 Reflective Analysis

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Once applying for English 135, I was not thrilled to take the class because English is my least favorite subject. But once I began doing my activities and participating with my peers, I’ve noticed the difference dramatically. The thing I enjoy the most about the methods you used was the peer-reviewed because it allowed me to feel like I was in an actual classroom As you requested, I have reviewed all the grading scale from the first to the last project. That allow me to identify my weaknesses and strengths to help me develop a strategy to pass project 4.

Strengths After reviewing feedback from my peers instructor, I’ve indicated my two outstanding writing strengths: my ability to write with a purpose,(which can be significantly found …show more content…
For example in project 2, I stated “…90% of woman working in the restaurant business report being bothered by something of sexual harassment and another 60% don’t officially report…” The sentence should have stated “…90% of woman working in restaurants report being bothered by some type of sexual harassment, and another 60% don’t officially report it…”

WORKPLAN In order to overcome my weaknesses, I have concluded the following plan. I will review Anderson’s chapter 10 for word choice. I will also use websites such as Paper-rate or Purdue owl. I will review punctuation on Purdue owl, and once I’ve finished I will use paper ready to help check for punctuation and wordiness errors. I will also ask my aunt to review my report. She has her bachelors degree in English literature. The final step is to meet with my professor in person for an overall review of my report.

CONCLUSION
Concluding my analysis of my work the semester, it has shown me that I need to better review and understand the rules of comma’s. Where two and not to place for them. Also, I need to avoid wordiness and choose the appropriate word choice. Overall, I believe my plan to conquer project for is sufficient for me to pass. I am always grateful for any other suggestions you may have for
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