We went in the format that the outline had expected, from the introduction to the problem and so forth. I think we expected the presentation to take a longer period of time than it actually did and for all of our topics to transition better when going from one person to another. We could have been bit more organized the way we presented, but I believe we made our point across and persuade the audience to donate to our organization. Although we had some issues that could’ve been straightened out, the presentation and the purpose behind our message was clear throughout. The delivery of our presentation, I believe, was able to engage the audience especially with the connection to the actual and their story with St. Jude’s Childrens Hospital. Being able to make an emotional and realistic connection allowed for our delivery to be more interesting, maybe through the middle of our presentation it lacked a bit, but overall it was clear and