Foster, is how frank your book is—especially in the sex chapters. There’s no smoothing or glancing over the details. You explain each segment professionally and expertly. The topic is not taboo here; I find it annoying when authors are condescending and secretive in literature. I never realized it before, but the reason “sex scenes” are so hard to write for authors is that our society has made sexuality so private and unspeakable. How can authors write and broadcast it to the world when it’s not even spoken about at home? Also while reading the chapters on sex, I liked the mention of how waves breaking on the beach or curtains billowing symbolize sex, on page 74. It amazes me how much readers can comprehend through juxtaposition, which we learned about in College Writing. If you want the reader to guess death and analyze what really happened, just use sounds of a gunshot—who shot it?—or a black rose to imply the meaning. I agree that implicit references keep the reader engaged with the story