Style
We used an MLA style for our essay 3 paper and works cited page. There were a few details of how style was used in our essay, for example, we set the tone through an Ernest Hemingway quote. The purpose of our essay came from the quote and how, as writers, we persevere through the process of writing. However, the accurate quote gave us a foundation in sentence fluency of how simple and straightforward it is for our audience to relate through writing. The essay was written in a familiar non-jargon format for readers to understand details …show more content…
I decided to change the use of word choice from a first person narrative to a third person perspective how how the writing process was used in writing. Than used the pronouns “I” and “we” to account for our personal experience and process as a group to write our essay.
Two classmates worshipped our group essay: … and Rebecca .. … noticed our word choice and sentence structure in each stage we presented in our paragraphs which I fixed. Also, Rebecca mentioned a few grammar mistakes we made in each paragraph about sentence flow. However, she mentioned that our essay was well organized and provided great evidence throughout.
I workshopped two papers. The first was … essay and the second was Rebecca .. essay. I told … that her content was informative than I made suggestions on word choice and mentioned a few grammar errors, such as drop quotes, run on sentences, and placement of periods and commas while using quotations. I told Rebecca that she had a good rhythm and style in her writing, but had grammar errors and word choice. I gave her suggestions to improve her organization in her essay and the use of