(HOOK) Novelist Sean Covey once wrote, “We are free to choose our paths, but we can't choose the consequences that come with them.” His compelling statement causes the reader to think about the results of their actions. (CI) In the same way, William Shakespeare’s Romeo and Juliet is an exceptional example of how misguided decisions lead to dire consequences. (GS1) While reading, one can discover how personality traits can develop unwanted repercussions. (GS2) Furthermore, it is evident that being misinformed or not completing a necessary task can produce unfavorable outcomes. (GS3) Lastly, and most importantly, failing to notice the harm being caused can indirectly affect the lives of many. (THESIS STATEMENT) The outcomes in William Shakespeare’s Romeo and Juliet could have been different if more informed choices had been made by the characters (I) Mercutio, (II) Romeo,(III) and Friar Laurence.
(TOPIC SENTENCE) Throughout Romeo and Juliet (THESIS I) Mercutio’s (MAJOR A) overdramatic behavior (MAJOR B) and enticing battle with Tybalt prove fatal to him in the end. (RE-WORDING MAJOR A) Mercutio’s melodramatic attitude is consistent during the play because wherever he goes he …show more content…
(CONCLUDING STATEMENTS) It is evident that all three characters are oblivious to the consequences their actions are bringing about. In Mercutio’s case his captivating charisma is charming at times, but eventually causes him to face his death in the end. Moreover, Romeo encounters his fate due to being misinformed about Friar Laurence's plan. Accordingly, Friar Laurence’s complicated yet intricate plan does more harm than good to each character involved. (CLINCHER) Ultimately, through this tragic love story, one realizes how just one choice can result with disastrous repercussions that affect various