It feels like one is in the scene because it feels as though one could hear it. It is not about actually seeing it but using one's senses to depict what is going on in the poem. By adding in sounds, it becomes more interactive when reading the poem. Owen is trying to make a personal attachment with the reader in the third line he uses “we cursed through sludge.” Using the pronoun “we” indicates that the reader has been included in the story, making it more personal. In the fourth line, he describes the way the soldiers are walking. They are not even walking gracefully but very sluggishly as he uses the harsh word “to trudge.” The reader can actually visualize the way the soldiers are and what they have to go through in the war. It is very different compared to “My Father in the Navy” because the way it is written is not interacting with the reader. It has one point of view as if the author is the one explain the story throughout the beginning to the end. Cofer uses first person to tell the story as if she were the actual little girl informing the reader about her dad. There is however the feel of a disconnected relationship because her father is barely at home. In line 4 of “My Father in the navy” Cofer states “he was an apparition on leave from a shadow-world” indicating the memory that the daughter had of him since he was always away. The image is even stronger when she describes when her mother, brother, and she are constantly awaiting his