Paperrater: Improving My Life

Words: 384
Pages: 2

This short story is about my little sister. I explained how she was a surprise to my brother and I. She was only my dads but still my blood. My brother, my mom, and I were not apart of her life for the first year because we didn’t know what to do or say around her. When that year passed, we finally went to meet her and it was one of the best days of my life. She now loves all of us and tries to spend everyday with us. This was written on booktrack with background music.
When I put my short story in Paperrater, it gives me tips on how to improve my writing. I took some of those tips to create a better, more creative paper.
There was a due date for my paper, so I had to plan out what I was going to do each day until it was due. I was able to