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Concussions have made players retier and make them not play a hole season thats it.In 2015 more than 271 players had concussion that year. Ricardo lockette had to re tire early because of concussion.In 2016 290 players had concussions. Carolina panthers qb had to 3 concussions in one season . spelling Tyler lockete had to have undergrone surgery because of his .leg was broken in half. In 2015number 24 on seattle seahawks broke his leg and hamstring and had to retire early.Ricardo lockette did not just retire because of concussion but broken tailbone. Last season tyler lockette fractured his ankle becase misplaced. Check spelling and spacing 40% of players have retierd from carrer ending injuries .The worst injuries are paralization. Nfl playershve retireed from carrer ending injuries. line backer borland had to retire from brutal injury.
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THat is why i think football is the most dangreous sport. Missing clinching statement. Do not address the reader or discuss the 5