There is a whole paragraph about Hazel’s father, a faster runner than Hazel, it explains how her father is not present during the story but Hazel aspires to be him and motivates herself before racing by thinking “you can beat your father up Amsterdam if you really try.” The use of organizing each supporting character into a paragraph is so that the critic can fully explain all points and ideas they have about that character in a certain space without confusing the reader with going back and forth. The “Overview of Raymond’s Run” was not executed in an organized manner so it confuses the reader with so much evidence and points in each paragraph that the critic does not fully explain each point and the reader may not understand claims with lack of support. When explaining that Hazel rejects the traditional feminine role they did not mention when she did not participate in the May Day pole event or when her mother forced her to wear a “strawberry” costume to a pageant as a little girl when she “didn’t have no better sense.