I like how you write the main idea of your rhetorical analysis, such as society negatively impacts women, and it is great to read the three points that you mention with addressing the pathos, ethos, and logos. I definitely agree that the documentary shows the fearing of growing up in the world which is unfair and derogatory to women. Also, it shows the lack of women’s power in the areas of politics and society. I think in this documentary, the author uses various methods to assert her argument by showing statistics and interviews from influential people in many fields. I also like that you mention many examples that help your analysis essay. According to the documentary, the media gives a message that sexuality is the way to achieve