It is possible that the girl tells a “lie,” a beautiful “lie” that lures the musician’s interest. Her lie would automatically trigger my readers’ curiosity because they can’t wait to find out the truth of the subtle relationship between the man and the girl. Indeed, her mysterious identity intoxicates the readers, but the musician seems to already know everything. He eats and stares at the girl without saying a word. His silence is intriguing, but it also implies the tacit understanding between the girl and him. …show more content…
It is not easy to make such a query to object a professional author in my rhetorical analysis essay, especially when her book is the national bestseller. I realized when I was trying to search for second source evidences that object Mandel’s argument when most book reviews and interviews are positive to Station Eleven. Journalists use all the fancy words they know to praise Mandel’s achievement as a popular writer. I believe there is a fine line between expressing admiration and being obsequious. However, the hardest part of this essay might be my inability to control what I need to demonstrate in a “safe range,” which includes avoiding factual errors. Unfortunately, I made several mistakes that caused my first draft being deceptive. I compared a fictional group with another fictional group, which was an awful move that would weaken my original attitude. I used the fictional TV show, The Walking Dead, as my evidence in the