This strategy is effective in emphasizing the power of a minor action such as marking up a paper in black pen as Gould does. King includes an example of how the marks look and soon follow with how much value it holds (495). There is then insinuation that before King meets Gould all his other teachers fail to honestly tell him what exactly is wrong and how to improve, but to instead only administer a grade. King then goes on to describe this examination as “like the Visible Man Old Raw Diehl” (495). Here, King compares the invisible man to himself and acts as if Gould can see right through him. Not only is Gould giving King’s work a chance, but giving King some actual faith as well. This faith is what King needs in order to break through the rebellious outer shell he claims himself to be. Though the actual process of marking Kings paper was very simple and to the point, it gives King the feedback and realization he needs in order to develop himself as a