Instructor: Erin Kramer
Composition 1
June 4, 2013
Analysis: Solutions 4 Hair
So as I was gazing at the newspaper, I ran across an ad for
“Solutions 4 Hair.” It is an ad to help those suffering from hair loss. In this
advertisement it states, “Hair Progression, Not Hair Extension.” This
salon has over 25 years of combined experience using this non-surgical
hair replacement procedure. At the end of the ad there is a contact
telephone number and a current address, but it also states that the
company services the Ohio and Michigan areas. In the bottom left corner
of the ad, just below the name of the company, there is a middle aged
woman positioned with a mirrored and window effect. Printed in the
bottom right corner is the business web page, www.solutionsforhair.org. I
really enjoyed the ad and I think that this company expressed their idea
of what an average person might look like after getting this procedure
done.
Solutions for Hair have used several different colors in this
particular advertisement. The ad is 3 ½ inches long and 5 inches wide.
The text is mostly a fuchsia pink with a ½ inch thick bar, also in pink,
going across the bottom of the ad. Solutions 4 Hair is positioned in the
top left corner and written in navy blue letters. There is a before and after
picture of a woman in the bottom left corner, each 1 inch by 1 ½ inch. In
the before pic, the woman is dressed in black with short blonde hair and
a gray background. In the after pic, the woman has a vibrant smile and is
wearing an Ohio State University shirt. She has long, lustrous, blonde hair
and is standing in front of a bright yellow wall. The advertiser states the
telephone number and location in black text. The after picture makes the
woman appear more beautiful, vibrant, and definitely happy. The
advertiser states “Ultratress 11 allows you to do more-and get more-than
the standard hair extension process”. This text is written in red and
located in the center right column.
I think this ad targets woman who wants longer and fuller hair. The
ad states that it is for men and women, but because it previews a
woman’s before and after picture, I think it’s mainly targeting woman
who suffer from hair thinning or hair loss. I think if the company wanted
to seek men suffering from baldness, they would have clearly placed a
before and after pic of a man in this advertisement.
I believe the text of this advertisement and the text do not interact
well together. It states in the ad that you will get more out of this
standard procedure than getting a hair extension process done. You
cannot visually see the difference. I cannot see what it is that you are
getting more of except hair. I believe Solutions for Hair should also have
placed a picture of how the procedure is done in this ad, or maybe what
equipment is used. I mean