The style of writing has a much more appealing flow. The structure of the sentences does a better job of drawing you in then the later stories. Also, I prefer the longer story because it allows for more plot development. In this story, the background of the ghosts are explained to better set the mode and help you understand why the place is haunted to begin with. In “The Phantom Hag”, they never explain who the ghost was, why it haunts the area, or why a kiss on the forehead by the ghost means death. It feels much more rushed and incomplete. Though the first story may have a more overused plot line, the style draws me in and the flow keeps me