However, when it comes to her excerpts from 'Dinners and Nightmares', her writing is much more dry in presentation. It's a hard transitions moving on from her poetry to her more narrative-centric writing. There is a note of affection beneath her wry observations of the past, but it doesn't come out as eloquently as her poems. DiPrima's poems are bursting with life, while this excerpt seems utterly devoid of energy. Beat authors traditionally tend to throw syntax to the wayside in order to create tone and capture a certain attitude, but DiPrima's poetry lacks proper syntax and still maintains a sense of warmth and vigor. Granted, there is the possibility that DiPrima was experimenting and tried to emulate the similar aloof facade that her male Beat peers exhibit. If anything can be gathered from this somewhat strange excerpt, it is that Diane DiPrima's writing prowess is garnered through being