I am Sophia Tolliver, an intern with Together Lives Change, and I am putting together an email to invite different colleges to attend our conference in July. I received your information from Mikel and I am requesting your assistance with putting together an email that will capture the attention of our future supporters. I have included my ideas below to just give you an idea of the direction I am headed in? I am open to any feedback you have!
My thoughts:
First paragraph
1. Quick intro
2. Mission of event
3. One sentence inviting them - date/location
Second paragraph
1. Describe event in few sentences
2. What you want them to do there
3. How they'll win!!
Last paragraph
1. Give them a deadline to respond