First, the position of the applicant’s name, email address and phone number is not proper. In the resume, applicant’s name and contact information show the basic information of who he / she is, so they should be placed on the most obvious position, which is usually on the top of the resume. In this resume, Lauren Dianne Untch puts her basic information under her address, which is less important. Hiring managers may ignore her resume because they do not see important information at first glance. Their first impression on her resume is unprofessional. In my opinion, she can improve the resume by putting her name and her contact information on the top, or at least in between her two address. Second, the resume is not in one page. It takes
