This essentially means that humans in today’s society use social media to portray themselves in any way they choose to. She spends a good amount of the opening few paragraphs discussing this idea. Although it causes the reader to believe that this is the topic of her essay, the idea fades away as she moves into new topics. However, she then begins to delve into the history of social media and how things came to be. The word “portrait” is only mentioned twice after the opening segment. Her unclear thesis leaves the reader wondering when he/she will discover the purpose of the essay, questioning “what’s the point?” This stood out as a problem because the uncertainty almost becomes distracting. If the message is not completely clear, it is hard to absorb the information given by the