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You Be the Judge Read the following application essay. See if you can figure out this essay's strengths and weaknesses. Then keep reading to see our critique. The Essay From the time I was able to realize what a university was, all I heard from my mother's side of the family was about the University of Michigan and the great heritage it has. Many a Saturday afternoon my grandfather would devote to me, by sitting me down in front of the television and reminiscing about the University of Michigan…
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However, nothing in life is perfect. Today, we have separated , same sex, extended, and blended families. Society tries to explain these more contemporary families but has a harsh way of doing so. In the essay, Stone Soup, by Barbara Kingsolver, she discusses how society views families and in the essay, Family Values, by Richard Rodriguez, he talks about American family values. Both…
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fact that soccer is one of the most popular sports in the world. According to Kunz, “265 million male and female players in addition to 5 million referees and officials make a grand total of 270 million people – or 4% of the world’s population – who are actively involved in the game of [soccer] ”(Kunz, 2007). Due to this popularity, soccer players also became a unique cultural group. However, the cultural aspects of these players are rarely revealed. Thus, this essay is to observe the soccer team of…
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Yates1 Rachel Yates World Literature (Argument Essay) Mr.Branham April 15, 2015 Is Passion The Key To Success? “Passion has little to do with euphoria and everything to do with patience. It is not about feeling good. It is about endurance. Like patience, passion comes from the same latin root: Pati. It does not mean to flow with exuberance. It means to suffer.” Mark Z. Danielewski once said. This quote proves that success can not be achieved without passion, you have to bust your butt to…
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PERSONAL ESSAY I am Franklin. I am from Africa, Cameroon. I never knew how it felt to be deaf until I left Cameroon three years ago. There, I did not understand English at all. It did not make sense to me and, it was very painful experience. I could hear noise and people talking around me but I was not getting the meaning. It was very difficult to be around people that were learning, laughing, and joking and not be able to understand. This was the first time in my life, I felt excluded, like…
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Vadim Shushanyants Professor Ireland English 101 26 March 2015 Hsun Tzu “Encouraging Learning” (Topic # 4) In the essay “Encouraging Learning”, Hsun Tzu emphasized the importance of continues learning. Hsun Tzu was one of the most famous early Confucian philosophers and was well known for his views on human nature and human way of life; that all human beings are born evil. He believed that natural instinct could only be changed through training and dedicated study. He also believed that learning…
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passed again. In order to feel less alone in the war against the mocking clock, two girls complained deep into the night, their unity making them feel more guarded against deadlines. One returned from dance, the other returned from soccer. The prospect of writing an essay, completing some notes, and solving math problems until two in the morning did not appeal to them. They needed a better weapon against the workload and stress. They needed two simple words. They needed Hakuna Matata. My friend Maya…
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Our father was building a strange house on our front lawn. Dana was playing basketball in Connecticut. Amy was miserable and Ethan was still part of the Odd Sea. More than anything, Halley and I needed to be together. And so it really didn’t matter what we were doing.” (63-64) This shows that he needs to be with his family. He tries to keep family together. He needs his parents but unfortunately his parents need some help to get through this too, so he tries to help them. It seems like Philip wants…
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Learning the tools of critical reading and writing not only teaches you the “what” of an issue, but also helps you think about and respond intelligently to the relative strength of the writer’s opinions, ideas, and theories. Critical thinking, reading, and writing enables you to distinguish between informed ideas and pure speculation, rational arguments and emotional ones, and organized essays and structurally deficient ones. Active reading means learning to annotate, to reflect on what you read, and develop personal respon…
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living overseas for three years. Being in a military family has forced me into cultures that are unknown to me and forced me to communicate with my family members using different means of technology at a young age. I understand the struggle of not being able to communicate with people in unfamiliar cultures. At the young age of nine, my family and I moved to Madrid, Spain. The immediate change in language was alarming to me as I had never been in a public setting that spoke and communicated exclusively…
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