I believe my persuasive purpose will be effective because my talking about gaining other skills you gain in college and not just being there for more money will appeal to people emotions. I am also using many details to back up my claims by going in depth to explain each of my points to show how character development is a logical skill you gain in college. Before doing my rough draft, I was unsure on what a scholarly source was. However after the rough draft I have a full understand on what scholarly sources is and how to find one. Moreover, I have learned when writing for an academic audience you should use scholarly sources. The reason is because you want to make sure you are using facts and statistics that are correct. This knew knowledge on how to find and use scholarly sources is going to help me when revising my essay and for future essay. I know fully grasp the concept that when writing for an academic audience especially for a college class you should use scholarly sources. Also, this project since it is for an academic audience your points should be clear and fully