College Tuition: Skyrocketing

Words: 227
Pages: 1

Kenneth,
I think your main argument is about college debt and how a student can use scholarships as a way to pay for college. However, the title of your essay, College Tuition is Skyrocketing, could lead the audience to believe that your essay would be about the increasing costs of going to college.
You gave a great deal of information on scholarships and the types that are available, but it was unclear as to who’s side of the argument you were on. You have made some good points about college debt and the hardship it brings on to a student and their family. If you added more detail supported by reliable sources you could build a stronger point of view. Your only reference to college and actual tuition cost is this sentence, “One year at