Sometimes my sentences can be short and choppy. I learned to explain my ideas efficiently and elongate them coherently. These sentences wouldn’t only contain my ideas, but they would also be written with purpose and not just useless information that does not give anything beneficial to my paper. The organization of my papers is more logical than what they used to be. I know how to bring in other authors opinions but still keep the original conversation by me. Also I learned that my thesis could change with time as I am writing my paper. It does not have to stay the same because as I get more sources and knowledge about the topic I can further explain and change my reason for writing the