I still have trouble setting up my structure for it to move smoothly without any mistakes in grammar or sentence structure. I have been writing on my own about my thoughts and expression, but it seems to be in the same style before with problems everywhere. Writing isn’t a passion, but I would use it as a form of expression when I can’t express myself in any other way. Self expression I would see is important and try to mention it every here and there in my writing, talking about the different views of different people. There isn’t two sides to a situation, like this essay, it could mean a million different things to a million different people. As a writer, there I see there is no such thing as criticism on the idea, but to the style of expression. This class opened up comma splices that I couldn’t address before as well as avoiding naked pronouns. I believe grammar is important to give the reader a better understanding about the topic at hand. I am a journalism major who is joining the military to pursue a career in Aviation, but plan to document it and express my views and