However, I can provide a hypothetical example of how she could have made her thesis explicit.
Original statement: "Homeless college students face numerous challenges."
Explicit thesis: "This article argues that the issue of homelessness among college students is a pressing concern that requires urgent attention from educational institutions and policymakers." By examining the systemic barriers faced by homeless college students, including lack of stable housing and financial insecurity, I aim to shed light on the need for comprehensive support systems