Topic Sentence 1: Jonas + freedom + community
Jonas a 12 year old boy is portrayed as a kid that lives in a utopian community, where the community is valued more than people's freedom. Which means, the civilians have very little to no freedom.
Lead in: Jonas is telling a story about when a plane flew over the community, and the speaker told every citizen to go inside their dwellings.
Quote 1: “instantly, obediently, Jonas Had dropped his bike on its side on the path besides his family's dwelling. he had run indoors and stay there alone(2).
Commentary: Jonas and the rest of the community do not …show more content…
Where exactly did riberto go? She lifted her bare wet shoulders in a small shrug “I don't know”(32)
Commentary: The community is not allowed the freedom to choose how they die and when, the community is like someone in a coma the doctor says we are going to pull the plug but the person in the coma has no choice in the matter.
Lead in: Jonas and the giver are watching a video about a release that Jonas’s father did earlier that morning
Quote 2: he killed it! My father killed it!(150)
Commentary: Jonas is learning about release, and he realizes that himself and the community do not have the freedom to learn about death in their community
Topic Sentence 3: jonas + freedom + escape
Jonas is learning how his community is really not living and not free and he wants to change that.
Quote 1: I said it because it's true it's the way they live it's the life that was created for