I had multiple drafts and a ton of editing on each one of them because I wanted to start off the year with a good grade. I struggle with how to assemble the sentences in the paragraphs, and how to make the title eye-catching. Another struggle would be vocabulary I did not know how to make sure that my vocabulary score was high so I had to look up words on the thesaurus to make sure I had a great vocabulary score. The major improvements that I made were grammar and the flow of each sentence. I really liked this essay because I thought that I had an exceptional vocabulary and the structure. This piece of writing shows how I improved in vocabulary and the writing structure. Something that I still have trouble with even after this essay was how to describe and explain quotations