Which this technique will really help me advance to get better and improve throughout all my processes of making an essay. One tip on my essay could actually change a lot because I could have changed the way I said things, or help to branch of with other topics concluding my main one. In one of my writing pieces called Jaundice which is a disease i use a lot of techniques to help my writing. First off I wrote it in a different form. “Newborns struggle with processing the bilirubin because their organs are still developing at the time. This causes your vitamin D level to be way lower than average.” This quote from my essay shows how I used and stated a fact to show how i'm delivering a message to the reader that will help people out physically and emotionally. I also went into different topics of jaundice “Crigler-Najjar Syndrome- Complications of an enzyme to produce