A good score for the first essay of the year, but missing only one thing: the coveted “unicorn point”. The point awarded for intricately threading together the web of thoughts and claims made in one's writing. I simply described the authors literary modes as, “The use of logos”, and “A satirical manner” in my introductory paragraph. No where near descriptive enough for rhetorical analysis. These near misses carried on throughout the many times of this